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All Comments on 'Sister Transforms Her Stepbrother Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Beautiful Storyn :):)

dodgeboy2dodgeboy2over 2 years agoAuthor

Thanks part 6 should be here in a couple of days

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Good story but be careful; you slipped from third person narrative to first person after dinner.

blade_rocknutblade_rocknutabout 2 years ago

There was far too much builup for the "telling dad" part for the scant bit of energy the scene recieved. That meeting had been building since the beginning, and should have been much MORE. Otherwise... I'm enjoying :)

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