All Comments on 'Sister Transforms Her Stepbrother'

Got the basis, but trouble with the basics.

Story outline is WONDERFUL. Haven't seen this idea floated before.

Your punctuation, however, is very weak. Something to get assistance with, or a strong editor. Often your sentences run on, due to lack of something as simple as a comma. A few times the sentence seemed to have adjusted focus without a comma.

The really tough one is the use of penis as genitals. To me, and I may be wrong, penis is singular while genitals is plural. In this case I would use genitalia.

This might fall under Der the auspices of your editor.

Please continue, I am surely not the only one waiting.

Hi, like your books, just want to say they are quite short and if you ever read this you should consider making longer books, instead of large amounts of small books.

Please continue. I can't wait to read how sissy boy meets a hot hunky well-hung man to suck.