All Comments on 'Sister Turns Eighteen Pt. 01'

More please, so love where this is going and eager to read more of their life together. Well done.

Fantastic

Amazing start to hopefully a long series. Cant wait to see where this goes.

Really well written, Thanks for this story! 5/5

Good framework but you could have done so much more with this. Jacob’s struggles through school and failed relationships. Cassie becoming more and more aware of her brother as a man. Finally, how can two people, that intelligent, not know about the morning after pill?

SexySenior56, I think you overlooked the part where she WANTS his children, and though unsaid, clearly he WANTs to give her children. WHY would they want a morning after pill? Great Story!

SexySenior56 - you are right - a lot more can be done - maybe we will explore more of these memories in flashbacks as we see more parts. As for the pill, she wants to be impregnated and has no problem with that. The focus was on getting a Part 1 that can both be a standalone story with a climax (literally and figuratively) and also the base for more parts. Thanks for reading.

An 18 year old boy is left with his infant sister all by himself. He goes to college and then medical school. He has so much wealth and time that they traveled to all the continents except Antarctica. Lol.

I have never seen a category/theme where verisimilitude simply doesn't matter to anyone.

Loved the sex scene and the emotions displayed. Some suspension of disbelief is always required for stories like these. Some issues of proof reading aside this is really good.

Completely "Far Fetched" story. My god, you have a Delusional Fantasy mind.

For ANY story to be entertaining, there HAS TO BE some semblance of Belief!! This has NONE!

Superb

AndrewT68

I love this story. I would love there to be more. Kinda like updates of how they go on.

Everything you have written in the past has been enjoyable and this one, too. When can we expect a part 2?

Loves it. Want more!