All Comments on 'Sisterly Assistance Ch. 01'

Your first story is fine if a little short. There is room for a continuation here.

I write as Kathleen48.

Very good. Don’t rush it, a bit of teasing never went amiss.

But far too short. And the handjob could/should have lasted much longer -- it was over much too fast.

More???

Damn, does no one remember their first handjob ?

Mine was over in seconds and if your honest yours was too so the teasing, the fast ejaculation is all so real .....

well done.... carry on please :)

It started off slow and not indicating any direction but then focused more on his arousal and hers to where she made him cum. Hopefully, she will let him return the favor ? The question is what did she do with the cum in her hand ?? Interesting isn't it. Thank you, great writing skills.

Wow, a really nice start to your story. But very few comments over the course of a year? Interesting how some stories seem to get more traffic than others. And I've seen some really piss poor stories that got lots of views, more than they deserved. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter. 5/5

Great start to maybe three or four more sequels.