All Comments on 'Sisterly Assistance Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Good start

Don’t rush yourself to get the next part finished. Keep following your plan for this series. These first two show a you can write and follow your storyline.

Thanks, keep on adding a part as you feel it is ready.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Again too short...

And again the peak -- in this case, his cock slipping into her pussy -- happened too fast. Why did it have to be a mistake? There was so much more that could have preceded it.

Nevertheless, looking for more.

sabra16023sabra16023about 4 years ago
Good Story

Just keep the story going, you are doing great. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

4 Star. Good story, I'm sure there are more things they can do when left alone.

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