All Comments on 'Sister's 18th Birthday'

Give Sarah's sexy brother a dusting of chest hair for his football player's chest! He is a muscular and manly young man!

Hot!!!

Hot n sexy story. I enjoyed reading it and hope you have some more of these two loving each other. Well done ffor your first story.

starts off ok, but loses a lot with all the typos toward the end, get an editor to proof read your stories

A Great story but a bit formal Call is penis a dick or cock same with her vagina a pussy .

Give more details of him cumming inside her how many shots does she feel it how deep is he up her?

Keep on writing.

Basic and fairly immature, full of errors and a hymen isn't where you think it is. Maybe try again when you're a little older?

Good story. Really enjoyed it. Love that your character defended small breasted women.

Nice to read a story where the women aren’t all c or d cups and the guys are 8”-10” long.

I mean, damn! After a while a guy could get a complex if it wasn’t for you and your down to earth story!

Liked this one a lot, hope there will be more to follow. So many people are all about stupidly big watermelon sized boobs but little flat but perky ones are so much sexier.

Pretty good read - a little quick to end it, though. While the beginning and end are well done - a little work toward the center of the story near the end. There is more here to develop - hope you choose to. But, all-in-all it stands alone as a darn good read.

5 I agree with others! No 38 DDs boobs or 8" cocks. A good story well told. This is what I hope for but rarely get.

Please continue this story, it is a good story line so far.