All Comments on 'Sisters and Brothers Ch. 01'

by Pathekos

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Excellent start would love this story to continue

Frankie1952Frankie1952almost 3 years ago

Fantastic start and very well done for your first story. I really enjoyed this first chapter and hope you write more soon.

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcalmost 3 years ago

Tentative 5* but I'm wary of only a relationship based on lust. The other couple are about open relationships, but a true sibling love story is as monogamous as any other - maybe even more so as the consequences of this failing are even more profound.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Damned good story. Decent character development good believeable dialogue and great sex scenes. I loved the mental conflict they both had. I'd really love to read more of these 2. Maybe a 4 some with Cathy and her brother? 4 stars

sucksexfulsucksexfulalmost 3 years ago

A very hot first story for you. 5 stars.

Looking forward to more of this story. 😈

Phoenix_LusterPhoenix_Lusteralmost 3 years ago

That was hot and horny. Loved it. easy 5 star from me.

PathekosPathekosalmost 3 years agoAuthor

Thank you for the kind comments and opinions. There will be further chapters... I just need to find the time to write them!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Love it and I can't wait to read further episodes.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

My 2 cents

5/5 stars. You took the time to develop your characters and a story line. I look forward to reading more. Thanks for your time and imagination.

ScottishTexanScottishTexanover 2 years ago

Definitely 5/5. I'm so looking forward to reading the next part.

KlitomaticKlitomaticover 2 years ago

Been there done that, and it was wonderful, and lasted for years. You got it right.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Hot hot hot! Follow up with more!

OseekerOseeker8 days ago

Great description of a world class fuck!

5 stars

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Writing naughty stories - often based on my own experience - for fun and relaxation. Always interested in constructive criticism.

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