All Comments on 'Sisters and Brothers Ch. 01'

Excellent start would love this story to continue

Fantastic start and very well done for your first story. I really enjoyed this first chapter and hope you write more soon.

Very nice!

Tentative 5* but I'm wary of only a relationship based on lust. The other couple are about open relationships, but a true sibling love story is as monogamous as any other - maybe even more so as the consequences of this failing are even more profound.

More, More, More

Damned good story. Decent character development good believeable dialogue and great sex scenes. I loved the mental conflict they both had. I'd really love to read more of these 2. Maybe a 4 some with Cathy and her brother? 4 stars

A very hot first story for you. 5 stars.

Looking forward to more of this story. 😈

That was hot and horny. Loved it. easy 5 star from me.

Thank you for the kind comments and opinions. There will be further chapters... I just need to find the time to write them!

Love it and I can't wait to read further episodes.

My 2 cents

5/5 stars. You took the time to develop your characters and a story line. I look forward to reading more. Thanks for your time and imagination.

Definitely 5/5. I'm so looking forward to reading the next part.

Been there done that, and it was wonderful, and lasted for years. You got it right.

Hot hot hot! Follow up with more!

Great description of a world class fuck!

5 stars