by Iva Biggun
One thing I've noticed in my 50 plus years is how close the gap is between bitchdom and slut city. I just love "angry" women. Great story!
Good writing, but what kind of woman would enjoy being gang-raped by her brother and his friends? Hardly seems like a credible premise, not many women like being raped, let alone by a group of despised losers... nice effort, just hard to make the leap from humiliating group sexual assault to tender and caring love making.
That took a nasty turn. I had to stop reading. No writer in the whole world could have saved that story for me after the gang rape. It really had potential until that happened. Oh, well, there is a target group for everything... -.-
even the tender ending could not save it for me
I stopped reading, you are trash, die in a hole.
P. S We all hate you Loser
-SS