by stevieraygovan
Wow, that was one fine piece of storytelling. I liked the characters, the storyline was relatively believeable (except for the club), and the action was unbelieveably hot.
Thanks!
That story is why I come to this site. Gems like this are worth all the drivel I sometimes have to wade through.
Thank you for a stunningly good read.
Now if only my wife and her sister would agree to reinact your story...
I loved both chapters of this story. Very hot, very arousing, and also quite well written. Please continue this story line, either about the rest of the week, or the next time the couples visit with each other, or both!
I can't wait to read more.
Loved the characters. I would love to see them in other situations (vacation togeter? add another couple?)
I'm finding that what I appreciate most about your stories, is the high level of trust and respect the characters share. That, and the fact that I can imagine walking down the street and actually meeting one of these people. They aren't cartoonish freaks; they have their foibles and fears, yet they are strong too. Thank you for continuing to write and share with us.
The caring between the sisters, and Dan, makes this a great story. Very, very, HOT!
Has all the elements of Porn ... Incest, exhibition, swapping , seduction, anal, lesbian - the best story I have ever read :)
Dude! I read a ton of stories on this site but I always come back to this one. I have not made it thru an entire reading yet without making a mess. Kudos
The description of Julie entering the club is sooooo awesome. I can see her in my mind, I want to BE her. One of my favorite stories on the site.
Well worth hunting for, fantastic. Enough detail to see everything and damn near feel everything.
What a story, took me three sessions to finish reading it, every session of reading had a happy sticky ending