All Comments on 'Sisters Ponder a Contest'

Many seemingly straight laced women have desire to exhibit. Many do it at girls night out adventures.

Whilst mildly more titilating than your earlier 'Wife's Topless Beach Choice', it still comes across as a little vanilla. Maybe you should switch viewpoints, go inside the wives' heads and see how anxious / aroused they were by all this (if not via an inner discourse, why not go for them excitedly chatting offstage before going on?).

I don't mean to be mean but this story had no real surprise to it. Perhaps some of the DJ's dialog could have spiced things up? More dialog that tells the story, less narrative. Otherwise, I found it to be cute.

A little short but I enjoyed it.

Some nice descriptions.

Thanks!