All Comments on 'Sisters Pt. 02 - Christmas Eve'

but alas! So careless with the language. Swapping from present tense to past; using "there" as pessessive pronoun.

I do not understand: Why spoil such a story based on so good idea?

My first comment refers to chapter 1 mostly. This chapter was more carefully written, congrats!

And the plot is funny, intelligent and hot. The sex descriptions are hardly ever so good as in your story. So five stars anyways.

I am really enjoying this series. Can’t wait for the next chapter