All Comments on 'Sister's Special Coffee...'

by Originsunknown

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

It was a good read, felt a bit rushed towards the end

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

You’re a man after my own heart, thanks for sharing your stories.

5*

Tc

Hollyweed6996Hollyweed6996over 2 years ago

Loved this story, cant wait to read more of these type of stories. mother or sister getting pregnant at the same time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Good. Need a part two maybe three.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I agree with that first comment, it was a good read and you really needed to run out the part about the father fucking his own sister. The father also must be a pussy whipped bastard he should have stood up for his son. As for the sister well that kind of relationship dose really happen in a lot of families it doesn't get talked about. You also wished you did not rush the final part of the story and could have included the Big Brother's girlfriend into it as a three way so knocked both of them up together. Just a few thoughts. A reader in Florida

Lee2012Lee2012over 2 years ago

Live the bomb at the end. No girlfriends like Jessica, though. 5*

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Loved it

Rancher46Rancher46over 2 years ago

What a great brother sister story. Well done. 5/5

Crusader235Crusader235over 2 years ago

Great little sister story. He needs to get Laura and Jessica together for a threesome. Hell, throw Mom into the fucking too, bet old dad ain't keeping up, and Mom needs some good cock too.

linnearlinnearover 2 years ago

Good story, the seduction was predictable but the rest I did not see coming. I was disappointed his mother threw him out, I know it isn't important but I would have been interested in his relationship with his parents after he left.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

@linnear, I do agree with your comment. However, after reading so many stories from Originsunknown, I would say, a little bit of variation is fine. Else you probably have read the sleepingwalking sis story...

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Women certainly can be sneaky.

The way this is laid out is interesting. It doesn't seem to need as much character development to buy in to the story. The way the women colaborate is sweet.

I also enjoyed the mother daughter connection in the magic dildo story.

Lass Lover

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Been writing for a while, will be posting more, all that were mostly written for my wife. As much as I love feedback, be polite! As one of my readers pointed out, this is an amateur site, I'm no professional and write to arouse, not to make a living. Some of my stories have ...

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