All Comments on 'Sisters Under Covers Ch. 01'

I come (lol) back to this story all the time. I so wish it had been continued!

Being male, but understanding the feeling of my Lady of many years, and then too, placing my own feelings ( of what being female is like) a story, like this, helps. Very intense, almost like being either one, and both, brought warmth, sensual and emotional sensations while reading. Would love “ being there” again. Please continue.

This is one of the most tragic abandoned projects on the site. It's so well written, erotic, sweet, and tender. Right through to that final, gentle kiss.

nice. i liked the tenderness between the characters. it seemed so innocent. and hot too! i dont think the details about the movie were necessary - but maybe that's because that movie, that actor and the tv show he is said to be from mean nothing to me... so those details just broke the flow of the story without adding important information... horror so bad its laughable is all I needed to know, to set the scene of a family enjoying their time together...

but the movie is a small detail in the end...

your descriptions of Corey's teasing and arousing touch up through Taylor's orgasm from her sister's caresses and kisses and her own left hand were really nicely done... easy to imagine and kind of perfect. i like that you are a writer before you are an erotic writer. i mean, that's how it seems to me, at any rate.

There's so much more these two adventurous little vixens want to be doing for our reading pleasure. Please write more!

I wish this had been continued. It was fantastic. Erotic, but also very sweet.

Please please, pretty please continue this story. It's such a good story, I feel this incompleteness inside me, just because this story has no continuation.

Nice

More please.

I loved this story, it is so brilliantly written you do not need an editor. PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE continue this story it is so incredibly beatiful as well as erotic. The LOVE between these two sisters is amazing and so caring. I LOVED IT. PLEASE MORE.

Your story was amazing. You don't need an editor ... express yourself!

I had my wife read this story while I went down on her and she came twice.

That was the first time she ever reacted like that. My wife who is straight is now reading lesbian stories with me. This is very hot.

Please.....continue

Please continue this! I would love to see Corey go all the way with Taylor! This was Part 1 so I hope we get Part 2! :)

Love the first chapter, truly love the slow build up. Definately would love to read more so please keep writing and continue this story into a series

Definitely do continue it was the best story I have ever read

So Taylor is in love with Corey but is Corey in love with Taylor? I would love to see Corey pleasuring Taylor all the way. ;)

I love the focus of breast play between the sisters here!

I'd love to read more. Great read.

Please write a Part 2!! Cory needs to pleasure Taylor!! Like more then hear greats! Please continue this story!!

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Thos was a short but perfect story. You're a good writer and I really want you to make chapter 2

I'm blown away with this story. You just have to bring them into the next phase of their lives. Please. Allow us to partake, of what is awaiting them. 5🌟's 😍😍😍

I would love to read more, next one soon please.

More please. Loved this soo much!

PLEASE make more of these i loved it

your writing is Amazing

You gotta ask if we want more, you're already in my favourite's waiting for next chapter. Hurry

Loved it, more more more!!!

That was brilliant. I do hope you will write much more

. Romantic & sweet & subtle. yesssss !

Is it just a coincidence that the two main characters names are the first and last name of a rock singer

hey nice

Very well written erotica. Had me hanging for the next line. Sweet and sexy. You should write more. I don't know but I swear you have to be a woman how well you described lesbian sex. Write more, it was over a 5.

...As Corey said to Taylor, this is beautiful. Yes, indeed!

Just a quick note: Please, if you are going to add another character to Corey and Taylor's relationship then please, add their mom. Please do NOT add their dad or some other guy or guys, that would utterly ruin the story. At least that is my opinion.

One of the most erotic, heartwarming and adorable stories I have ever read. To say I love it does not make it justice.

Hey thanks for this mightyhans. It was awesome. Moving so gently, so slowly, so delicately. This is one of the best accounts of young love that I've ever read. I could visualise the two girls so much I could almost see them. I can't wait for chapter 2.

Thanks. I could hardly breathe.

The erotic buildup of breast play. Give it 5 cums and more please!

LOL... if my sister is good enough for me...

This story is dumb.

lol best author on this site, there needs to be a 6 star rating for unmatched.

I read this story long ago and fell in love with it. I just had a sudden urge for this type of taboo again, and couldn't recall the story's name. I searched this site and couldn't find it by what i knew. So i googled lesbian sister story during movie night.

I loved this so much I had tp comment and sign up, to favorite this.

-Quocalimar

I would love to read more of this story and if u have more about sisters having sex together i would love to read those too

Like @Da1337dude said, we need more!

I know you wrote this a year ago, but please write more. It is an amazing story!

You did emotion really well. Really drew me in. One of the most realistic and plausible scenes I've seen. The build-up and nipple play was really cute, for want of a better word.

But after all that build-up, Corey doesn't even touch Taylor's privates? WTF? And then it seems like Corey orgasms almost as soon as she starts masturbating. Much of this story, especially towards the end, joins the ranks of the many stories who don't follow the "show, don't tell" rule. You stood out because you showed and didn't tell the emotions, but then you kind of stuffed it by telling instead of showing Corey's masturbation. After all that really-hot buildup, the reader wants something to come over at the end. There just...wasn't. Writing "and then she has an orgasm" is always a great way to ruin an ending. Yours was a little better than that, but could have been much better.

Please, more. And have them go further. Don't turn it into IKEA Erotica, or "and then she finger-fucked her roughly, shoving her digits up her pussy"; keep the same style and intimate, sensual and non-dirty tone, it's really hot and getting much rarer, but please, write more actions. Have them go further. Tell me how Corey's body feels, as well as her mind, and what she does to herself. Or what Taylor does to her. You left too much to my imagination, so I didn't have enough to build on. Don't say "[I] was furiously masturbating my pussy." Tell me how. What does she do?

I'm not saying it was bad. It was much better than most of what I read on here. But it needs something more. Most people go overboard with writing the physical actions and have no emotion. You swung too far the other way.

Makes me wish I had a sister

loved this! such intense passion!

this was so good!!

gimme more!!!!!! please!

its almost a crime to not keep going. 5 stars. more chapters plox!

Great story! You need to continue this story. Please give us more! Excellent!

It had to be one of the most erotic stories I have ever read. Please continue

yes i think you should continue the story. it sound like it needs to be continued or something. more chapters.

please

I really don't want to sound generic, but this really WAS an INCREDIBLE story. I really hope with all my heart that you continue it.

that was so exciting, we need more and maybe some sexy nylons

Wow that was so hot!!!!!!!! Yes I want more!!!!!!!!

This was truly amazing, both hot in that DDAAAAAAMMMNNNN but also very sweet in their gentleness. I don't normally do incest but other than that this story was amazing 5stars and a favorite from me. Please continue this one day will you?

so sender. so passionate. so loving. i think you should involve toys in the next one.

This was so hot! We'd love to know what Taylor does next. Good job.

Excellent story, please continue! I'm sure Taylor is excited to return the favor for her beautiful and sexy older sister. They'll have to be sneaky since they both live at home but it will be worth it I'm sure :)

Great stuff!!!

please comtinue this story it is wone of them ost erotic stories id ever heard so please continue it PLEASEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

keep writing the story I would like to read the endig if there is one.

Love this story!

Need to continuou it!

Begging you to continue, so good.

So erotic good storyline.

Please continue, really hot!

1 0f d gr8est stories here plz continue wid it

Really need to continue this story.

I really think u should continue, but try 2 make the next 1 longer

This NEEDS to be continued. This is one of the best lesbian stories on here.

What happens next??

This is the best one yet. Totally continue! This is so hot lol I luv it!

one of the best stories I have read, you MUST continue this story!

Very erotic! Please continue!

you should definitely continue the story.

That was so nice. Sweet love.

you must continue this story

plz continue the story, it was REALLY good ! :)

Excellent! Excellent! I gotta read more!

Loved it!

This was one of the best ones ive read hands down. what happens next?!

Awesome. More please

Loved it! Would love to see more!

I want to read chapter 2 & 3 & ....

I do hope that you add more to the story. It drew me in and I'm sure the next installment will do exactly the same.

Please add another chapter. I can wait to hear how the sisters become even closer.

I have to agree with all the comments about at least another chapter. Would love to see some more character developement. Maybe get another set of sisters involved or heck, maybe even Mom too. Don't get carried away with turning a great story into a sexual extravaganza. Keep it light and erotic.

Agree with the general sentiment that this needs at least one more chapter, hopefully one long enough for Corey to explain what suddenly prompted her to make a move on Taylor, and for Taylor to explore her own reactions.

That is all.

please keep it going

keep it going!

great story start.. can't wait for the next chapter.. keep it up.

This is a great start to what promised to be a great series. Keep up the good work. I'll be watching for chapter 2

Your writing skills made me feel like I was right there, experiencing all of that with you.

Regarding your editor, you don't need their help in my opinion. Just keep writing....PLEASE !! 5 Stars from me.

brilliant keep on writing

I remained hard almost from the opening line...

Loved the slow burn, the tension and the gentleness. Can't wait to read more from you.

More, much more! I little more detail on the girls would be nice too

Must continue. Always keep it slow and deliberate. Add mom, then mom's sister then a multii-way as a finish. No men allowed

Don't go making the situation more complicated until your readers have a solid understanding of the two major characters you've introduced so far. Lesbian incest is only an interesting area to explore if there are real chracters behind it, otherwise it may as well just be two random people screwing.

Add Mom and keep it a sapphic love fest.

Very nicely constructed story, especially good considering the lack of editor. I'm looking forward to more in this vein. Thanks for your efforts, keep up the good work.

I have to question myself. I've never been turned on by a piece of incest work, but, Lord have mercy, I do believe that I am now! Good work! It definitely needs some editing, but it is a good beginning.