All Comments on 'Six Nights to Love'

by CJMcCormick

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SisterJezabelSisterJezabelalmost 4 years ago

What a lovely, sweet story. Thank you :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
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I totally agree with Sister Jezebel

A sweet sweet story.

5*

G5902G5902almost 4 years ago
Wonderful Story!

Thank you for sharing such a wonderfully written story that is sooooo sweet and romantic!

paulyepspaulyepsalmost 4 years ago

That was amazing !! I loved it from the start .. I’m so glad it ended well .. you are a truly talented writer .. thanks for sharing this love story ... ❤️

DazzyDDazzyDalmost 4 years ago
Excellent way

I'm for a great ending!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Sucker.

I'm a big old sucker for romance with a happy ending. Good story and just the right amount of sex.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Another favorite

This story gives me the feels. I remember a boy I knew from kinergarten. We were together until he left for the US when we were in grade 4. I loved him then and thought that if he didn't leave, maybe he would've been my Andy. But alas, I never saw him again. And also, I realized I was a lesbian later on. But it always made me wonder... Yan

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Outstanding

Outstanding romance writer. These would make the best chick flicks. These are about a boy and girl overcoming obstacles and love flourishing. Congratulations on being a master writer

robdh51robdh51about 3 years ago
Excellent!

5 stars. I really enjoy your writing. I have a hard time getting through your long, multi-chapter stories. Enjoy the shorter ones much more. Please continue with these!!!

rayironyrayironyabout 3 years ago
Good, nicely composed,

dramatic build to repeated climaxes....

However, it was pretty predictable.

All in all, not at all bad.

AngstIgnoredAngstIgnoredalmost 3 years ago

"It seemed she finally accepted it as an expression of fearful neutrality assumed on her face."

This sentence appears at an extremely critical point, in fact one where he pretty much drops the ball. Unfortunately, it's extremely hard to parse and I'm not even sure it conveys what the author intended.

Overall an interesting read. Perhaps a bit difficult to reconcile her being a 'late bloomer' in college, yet somehow being a world class deep throat artist when the moment comes for them. Same with the dialogue, where she just starts repeating herself over and over about how much she wants to swallow his load. Seems a bit over the top for the long lost love separated by a decade. Luckily he didn't get caught up in him wondering exactly how she learned that particular oral talent so well or learned to love gobbling a man's load so much. One could argue it would have been more romantic for her handling of him to evolve over time between the two of them instead, even your had this six day rush thing to contend with. At least you avoided the dreaded "oh my god, you're hung like a horse" moment so often seen, though you could argue that scene at least suggests the notion without hitting the reader with it directly.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Beautiful!

I loved the interactions of the main characters. Very romantic.

Thanks for sharing.

5+ stars!

Rancher46Rancher46about 2 years ago

Well composed and written. What a great love story, as they say, "Love Conquers All" and so it did. At one point when the story had him going through security I was wondering if he was going to get on the plane. I assume that his luggage had already been checked in and that it was going to go without him. I just love how this author does not leave you hanging and always brings the story full circle to a happily ever after. Well done 5++++stars

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Very well written and so sweet, definitely a candidate for a Hallmark movie script =D

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This might be my favorite story on this site! It was so sweet I started to cry and so steamy during their sex scenes I started sweating lol. 10/10 loved it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Awesome story, so creatively written

DuncanitaDuncanitaalmost 2 years ago

Totally epic story... could feel all the emotions... going to Italy together could have been the right option at the getgo...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Simply brilliant!

Oldsofty1961Oldsofty1961almost 2 years ago

very nice story five

Flar1958Flar1958over 1 year ago
For one he put her before carriere

A rare story because his promotion means nothing without her! In other storie you read "i did it for you and house ,car and so on" and neglect their spouse. And wonder why next read in loving wife .

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Amazing! Very well-written.

Thank you for sharing.

5+++ stars!

RanDog025RanDog025over 1 year ago

Loved it. Great story! 5 BIG FAT STARS!

gpspringergpspringerover 1 year ago

Don’t stop writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I really enjoyed the story, but it was a bit disappointing in how long it took them to figure out they could be together by both going just like they could by both staying.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I loved your story, I can't wait to ready more of your writing

G5902G5902over 1 year ago

Fantastic story!!! As my yearly January beach trip comes to a conclusion this is one of two stories that I must allow myself to sit back and enjoy. So, with a glass of fine wine here I sit on my balcony, over looking the beach and the surf, with a happy smile! Thank you!!!

OU8ME2ICOU8ME2ICabout 1 year ago

Another beautiful love story. CJMcCormick, you have quite the talent for writing romantic love stories. I can’t wait to read future ones.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Still love this story the second time through, sweet and heartwarming. Such a perfect Hallmark movie concept. 5*

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Lovely lovely romantic story!!! 5 stars!!!

MysticMysteryMysticMysteryabout 1 month ago

Loved it, thank you. 5*

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Long time, no talk! I'm still around and still writing. I had someone reach out to see if I was still alive, and I very much am. I no longer write under the CJ McCormick pen name though, and I have migrated to using three new pens. I won't be posting to Literotica any lo...