by CJMcCormick
Thank you for sharing such a wonderfully written story that is sooooo sweet and romantic!
That was amazing !! I loved it from the start .. I’m so glad it ended well .. you are a truly talented writer .. thanks for sharing this love story ... ❤️
I'm a big old sucker for romance with a happy ending. Good story and just the right amount of sex.
This story gives me the feels. I remember a boy I knew from kinergarten. We were together until he left for the US when we were in grade 4. I loved him then and thought that if he didn't leave, maybe he would've been my Andy. But alas, I never saw him again. And also, I realized I was a lesbian later on. But it always made me wonder... Yan
Outstanding romance writer. These would make the best chick flicks. These are about a boy and girl overcoming obstacles and love flourishing. Congratulations on being a master writer
5 stars. I really enjoy your writing. I have a hard time getting through your long, multi-chapter stories. Enjoy the shorter ones much more. Please continue with these!!!
dramatic build to repeated climaxes....
However, it was pretty predictable.
All in all, not at all bad.
"It seemed she finally accepted it as an expression of fearful neutrality assumed on her face."
This sentence appears at an extremely critical point, in fact one where he pretty much drops the ball. Unfortunately, it's extremely hard to parse and I'm not even sure it conveys what the author intended.
Overall an interesting read. Perhaps a bit difficult to reconcile her being a 'late bloomer' in college, yet somehow being a world class deep throat artist when the moment comes for them. Same with the dialogue, where she just starts repeating herself over and over about how much she wants to swallow his load. Seems a bit over the top for the long lost love separated by a decade. Luckily he didn't get caught up in him wondering exactly how she learned that particular oral talent so well or learned to love gobbling a man's load so much. One could argue it would have been more romantic for her handling of him to evolve over time between the two of them instead, even your had this six day rush thing to contend with. At least you avoided the dreaded "oh my god, you're hung like a horse" moment so often seen, though you could argue that scene at least suggests the notion without hitting the reader with it directly.
Beautiful!
I loved the interactions of the main characters. Very romantic.
Thanks for sharing.
5+ stars!
Well composed and written. What a great love story, as they say, "Love Conquers All" and so it did. At one point when the story had him going through security I was wondering if he was going to get on the plane. I assume that his luggage had already been checked in and that it was going to go without him. I just love how this author does not leave you hanging and always brings the story full circle to a happily ever after. Well done 5++++stars
Very well written and so sweet, definitely a candidate for a Hallmark movie script =D
This might be my favorite story on this site! It was so sweet I started to cry and so steamy during their sex scenes I started sweating lol. 10/10 loved it
Totally epic story... could feel all the emotions... going to Italy together could have been the right option at the getgo...
A rare story because his promotion means nothing without her! In other storie you read "i did it for you and house ,car and so on" and neglect their spouse. And wonder why next read in loving wife .
I really enjoyed the story, but it was a bit disappointing in how long it took them to figure out they could be together by both going just like they could by both staying.
Fantastic story!!! As my yearly January beach trip comes to a conclusion this is one of two stories that I must allow myself to sit back and enjoy. So, with a glass of fine wine here I sit on my balcony, over looking the beach and the surf, with a happy smile! Thank you!!!
Another beautiful love story. CJMcCormick, you have quite the talent for writing romantic love stories. I can’t wait to read future ones.
Still love this story the second time through, sweet and heartwarming. Such a perfect Hallmark movie concept. 5*