All Comments on 'Six of the Best'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
SHIT

that was shit .unless u write more .then it my be ok

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Nice.

This is really good. It evokes a real scene of erotic discipline and the little details are wonderful. I only wish it were longer. I hope he's made to show his penitence by cleaning Her soiled hosiery with his tongue, but that's the author's choice. Nice work.

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