All Comments on 'Sixty Seconds Over Laura'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Nice!

Exceptionally well written, I enjoyed it immensely!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Not into the gay thing, but the story was very well written and made it a worthwhile read. I wish there were a million Laura’s out their in our real world!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Perfection, dirty glorious perfection

I *love* writing 3some smut, and it can be difficult to get folks engaged if there's any "gay" stuff. And in mine there always is (I love the MFM poly dynamic) - so keeping the reader drawn in is key.

Amazing job, thank you for the head spin 😍

ADudeAboutTownADudeAboutTownover 2 years ago

fucking grade A perfect

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After dozens of trips around the sun I've come to the conclusion that there's way too much greed and violence in the world. Sex could be something universal that brings people together but somehow, that's been fucked up as well. Most of my stories are pulled together from peop...