by DiscipleN
Not to be the grammar police, but since you brought it up. Between you and me, was actually correct in the first place.
It's like a second grader with ADD is writing these stories. It's extremely hard to follow, the story jumps all over the place and goes off on these tangents, a lot of the time you don't know who's speaking and after three stories, nothing has really changed since the first one. Nothing has advanced at all. still no real incest to speak of just some fooling around.