All Comments on 'Sizequeen Resort Pt. 02'

AMAZING KEEP IT UP <3

Grammatical errors aside this is a solid story. Jacob speaking on the psychology of a cuck seems subjective and pretty weak thought process but other than that I loved the character interactions

I love the story. Please get an editor to to review the next segment so that more readers can enjoy it to the fullest.

Just when I’m thinking how badly I want to be Rachel I come across elementary level grammar errors that break my journey. Did you know lit member will edit your work for free?

This is s really sexy viewpoint very hot want the next sexion asap

I love the story, I really enjoy it, I read it over and over. Cant wait for the third part :) Its really great that you make the structure like that, all swingers couples, one bull and one cuckold, it brings so much more humiliation to the story. Rachel, Jack, Jacob and all other people on the resort are awesome. 

THIS IS MY DREAM STORY I WANT THAT IN REALITY IDK HOW IT WILL BE POSSIBLE AND I HAVE REQUEST TO AUTHOR PLEASE PUBLISH NEXT PART ASAP AND IF POSSIBLE ADD MOTHER IN LAW HUMILATION IN THIS STORY

WHEN WILL THE NEXT PART COME BRO

please include watersports and more humiliation

When are we going to get the next part

This is a fun and sex story. Tropical paradise, away from all of the things like jobs, family, neighbors that keep us tethered in place. The fact that in the first story the action starts with the cuckold’s girlfriend having participated in some programatic deceit, spending a month preparing and leaving him in the dark about it, and then their forgetting to set a safe word actually does spoil some of the pleasure for me. It simply leaves open the possibility that he may feel regret or recrimination. I’d rather he had the safe word and could choose not to use it than have it occur to him to have been an oversight. I don’t know whether these issues resonate with any of your other readers and or if there is any way for the couple to process or discuss these issues or set a safe word as they proceed with their stay at the resort.

Good luck with next chapters