All Comments on 'Ski Trip'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Liked it but too short

Make the next chapter longer

liz33ndliz33ndabout 7 years ago
very nice plot but....

this needs lots more detail and seduction, it was well written and easy to read, just to short to get me off.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Sorry, nope

This is one of my favorite scenarios.

But I had to stop half way through. It read like a guy trying to write like a woman.

I checked the bio to see sex and orientation and it was written in third person.

Sorry, nope

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