by Romance47
I think you could use an editor, but tbh, most of us do. It's hard to self-edit. I hope to see more from you soon. Take care!
If anyone knows a good editor please recommend them, thanks.
Wat de hell happened.....Everything was going so well. .....pls keep it coming
Don't let Anons make you hesitate to write. You're doing this for free and are kind enough to share with us. So you have mistakes. We know you're a work in progress. :0)
Don't worry about an editor. I just want to read more of the story.....please.
I WANT MORE! Does anyone know if this story is somewhere else in the world? I cannot stop thinking about what happens....even thought about different scenarios