I believe you ate a ‘hearty’ breakfast, not a hardy one. Changes in tenses very distracting. The teaser suggested they were interrupted by people, not a moose, and thus it seemed like a bait and switch situation.
Just an old romantic at heart. Most of my stories are romances that develop over time. Since they are romances, it’s a given that the two main characters are likely to end up in a relationship and, since this is Literotica, there’s likely to be sex. I try to create interesti...