All Comments on 'Sky Pays the Rent Pt. 08'

by alanhomerj

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Proofread, proofread, proofread!

Your grammar is getting sloppier as this series progresses- it’s very much detracting from the flow of reading, stop being so rushed!

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