All Comments on 'Slave'

Wtf even is this crap

You are demented and a total waste of skin I can't say anymore then that

Honestly, it was like you strung a bunch of random words together and tried to make it erotic....and failed miserably.

Were you drunk when you wrote this?

Humiliation in story isnt my thing, but what made this story bad is fast pacibg, not enough description, no character building, something to keep us ibterested. Please try again, you can do it much better, you are not without idea.

I thought that this was hot. Ignore the other comments. Bravo. Can’t wait to read more.

Dunno about you guys but I came

It's not a bad story but not all that great either. It could be improved if you added more details, did more character growth or development, and built a story that was more paced and didn't feel rushed.

Turning her into his whore is ideal. Tell us more.

'BUT THEN HE RAPED MY PUSSY FROM BEHIND!'

tell the story... don't just shout past tense statements.

lot of good here.. just flesh it out (and ignore the haters)

looking forward to more from you!

'BUT THEN HE RAPED MY PUSSY FROM BEHIND!'

tell the story... don't just shout past tense statements.

lot of good here.. just flesh it out (and ignore the haters)

looking forward to more from you!

'BUT THEN HE RAPED MY PUSSY FROM BEHIND!'

tell the story... don't just shout past tense statements.

lot of good here.. just flesh it out (and ignore the haters)

looking forward to more from you!

Finally a good masochist’s story!!