All Comments on 'Slave Christina Ch. 02'

It good to read a story where the Sick perverts get what they deserve. I would have been happy if she had gotten the police and Earl and his friends went to jail, but this is good too.. that was a happy ending.

That escalated quickly!

At least you ended the story , the right way. Some suggestions , though. Better to not use personal narration for better detail. Also more dialogue and rest first person re-telling was needed to get better into characterization. Also, don't just brush over the sexual activity, which is the reason for the story. And lastly, but not less important, if the point is that the girl is made to role play the slave status, then she must call her Master , well, Master. This Daddy thing can be part of the games but ... You get my meaning, I hope. Thanks.