All Comments on 'Slave Ch. 06'

Awesome story so far. Please keep writing! Your series so far as kept me up all night not wanting to stop reading it. I look forward to reading more.

~Luna~

Was sort of hoping that sooner or later, she would obtain some small freedoms, like limited use of her hands/arms, talking and hoping that he hadn't quite carried through on the hysterectomy.

I think it's the womb that makes a slave more slave, than when it's missing.

Phenomenal! It was well written and enthralling from start to finish. Like car crash tv, I was rivetted from the first chapter and couldn't stop until I'd finished the story. Another excellent piece from you.

it was really good; i couldn't stop reading, but the ending lacked for me.

Possibly some sadists may get off on this but sadly although I love slave stories ,this was just too fucked up and brutal.

Overall a VERY good story.

Will there be more to this story? Chapter 7?!

A bit brutal. But most are. The longest slave story I've read. Kept me interested. Will there be more?

Absolutely loved this story! wish it would never end. Please write more. It was just brutal enough for my tastes. It hit on almost every one of my major fantasy or fetishes, then added a little more pain to keep it interesting. It made me so wet wishing that I could be her.

i allmost didn't read this one.sorta glad i did.

I can dream for such a place where I can enjoy my girls in the manner that we all wish to live. When I allowed them to read this story they begged to be trained and "enjoyed" as slave was. Difficult in this society but I promised them the closest life to it.

Many Thanks to Thring

I don't understand why people like this. It's depressing to see a person degraded like this. Really says a lot about the people that are into this. Hmph.

I liked this story series a lot. As such, I believe the following statements might initially come as a surprise.

I urge you to consider stopping here, if you aren't already resolved to do so. All things must end, and this story feels like it has come to a close as well. Good things become mediocre things if they drag on top long. I honestly believe you likely intended to wrap the story up here, with many adventures behind our protagonist. There is much left to the reader's imagination, with a rich world left partially unexplored. You have done well, and I think your story series is a fine work of art.

I like the fact that she has some how maintain some of herself while excepting the reality of her situation. If given the chance to escape or if rescued I suspect she would find some good use for her life other than sex slave and freak in spite all the cruelty she has had to endure. I know there is a special place in hell for her Master and that helps me sleep at night.

Every time Master comes home I am almost over come with joy! He is my reason for living

Absolutely wonderful righting, wish there was more of this story. I loved that she was able to keep her "identity" and self even after everything was done to her. Not many slave stories on Lit do that and I really appreciate it here.