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More please. Soon!!!!

please continue

A really very clever story, well told and a complete change from most of the stories on this site. Well done.

it’s (its) (2)

Masters (Master’s) (6)

master (Master) (32)

patty (Patty) (6)

patty’s (Patty’s)

pealed (peeled)

micro-oven (microwave oven)

bed time (bedtime)

free women (freewomen)

Cindy WAS VERY EXCITED when they exited the cab, she had told Patty she had never been to market before and she WAS VERY EXCITED to see it (28 WORDS)

peoples (people’s)

wide eyed (wide-eyed)

(-A SLAVE) should always know what to do when THEIR (Slaves)

afraid if you (of)

other wise (otherwise)

engen girl (EnGen)

market place (marketplace)

Cindy knees (kneels)

immediately Jumped (jumped)

Master Locks (locks)

lays on the bed (lies)

"G" spot (G-spot)

side of her face and Patty dutifully licks it off (SHE MUST HAVE A FREAKISHLY LONG TONGUE TO BE ABLE TO LICK THE SIDE OF HER FACE!!!!)

far to insistent (too)

every one (everyone)

it's self (itself) (2)

ny self (myself)

down load (download)

Girls (girls)

bed chamber (bedchamber) (2)

(THE ENDING PORTION OF THIS STORY COULD VERY EASILY HAVE BEEN CUT AND PASTED FROM THE BEGINNING OF THE STORY WITH FEW CHANGES SAVE ALTERING IT SLIGHTLY TO REFLECT TWO SLAVES RATHER THAN ONE!!!!)