All Comments on 'Slave Girl'

You give us a hard choice, CamillaHumby - whether we would be the slave or the Mistress if this were RL!

Thank you for this fascinating, unusual and extremely hot story - five stars.

This concept can go on and on...wonderful. Thank you.

Ive read quite a few stories about bondage, but never really found many that let the slave girl be truly happy with her situation (by personal choice).

I hope you make this into a series. It's a plot that isn't used too often and could easily be expanded.

Well written, well paced. Erotic.

I love this story and hope that you can make a sequel with this relationship between mistress and slave.

That was incridebley sexy ! Hope there's more

So well written and complex. I am becoming a big fan.

Absolutely beautifully written. Wonderful job!

Your writing skill is very good, and I especially like the way your dialogue is natural, and believable. The Power dynamic is verrrry well represented in this story, and with clear (and pleasing) erotic overtones. I prefer the Dominant to have a caring edge to their steel (kind of a velvet-hammer vibe), so your protagonist really connected with me. That the slave has no choice (that we know of) doesn't sit well with me, which segues into the "but not" part of my comment.

What bothers me in this story is what bothers me about the reality the story parallels; human slavery. I know, the conditions of the world make slavers and slaves a reality. I'm don't think I'm naive about it, and writing (or not writing) about it won't change the reality.

I like your writing style and skill. Please write more.

You find holding someone captive as a slave to be sexy, interesting or fun? Even for fiction this was bad.

hot

wonder what her hubby did to piss her off..?

pity she didn't care for her slave's muffin

Very erotic, extremely arousing, well-written.