All Comments on 'Slave Girl Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Y I K E S

Very bad this multi part tale has no story line to it . .

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Character criticizing

Your main characters are functionally retarded. They are so incapable of learning from their mistakes that they are just one dimensional.

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