All Comments on 'Slave Hunters, Slave Preys Ch. 02'

by Nikita_and_Wolff

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

It's an interesting story, but you're going overboard with your descriptions, making things confusing.

pagan girlpagan girlover 17 years ago
Swoon!

my god how hot...

dertygerldertygerlover 17 years ago
This is a wild ride

I didn't expect this chapter to be so wild! Excellent!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Intersting and enjoyable

Great use of pop cultura references, although it might be lost on some readers, it adds to it's literary quality

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