All Comments on 'Slave of the Palace'

I loved this story! More please!

This is very well written and shows that not all owners are cruel. Amir I believe was hurt as bad giving the punishment knowing it was unearned and that she was just a girl. He did know that if he didn't do a good punishment she would have to endure the punishment from someone who would take a great deal of pleasure punishing the girl. It is a great ending but I wonder if you will write about Amir and Karjira in the future.

Excellent story and very well written. This pair and their fascinating beginning truly deserve to be developed into a long story line.

..... that one hopes will continue. Exceptionally written.