All Comments on 'Slave on Stage'

Very good indeed; more please in this vein.

Very fun story! I liked the erotic descriptions a lot. The slave's letter to her Master was very hot, particularly with her panties in her mouth. The ending was also really nice. Good job!

This was a very well-written and well-told vignette. I had a boss once who had me wondering about the relationship between he and his wife. Both were executives, and he was a real presence in any room he entered. I watched him direct people's attention to his wife when he attended a meeting where they both were. He was masterful at redirecting attention where it should have been. I found him to be a good mentor for me, too.

But this story took that marriage dynamic and made me wonder again at how they worked together at home. He was a powerful man, and she had her own power base as well. Thanks for a great story.

I found this story mesmerizing. The dynamics between the two showed the love they had for each other. It was very sexy-hot but also sweet. You did an excellent job showing how we all present one side of ourselves to the outside world and another side of ourselves to our partners. The trust they had in each other was beautiful and well-written. 5 stars