All Comments on 'Slave to Desire'

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nakedguyatxnakedguyatx4 months ago

I'm sure there is plenty of interest in what happens next, and in whether she stays. The only thing missing in this story is that a slave needs a good whipping, or at least a flogging, from time to time.

JohnMurray4173JohnMurray41734 months agoAuthor

@nakedguyatx: Give the poor girl a chance. She's only been serving for around fifteen hours :)

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

I'd love to find out whether Emma chooses to stay as Diana's submissive slave.

rentturtlerentturtle4 months ago

whew that was good. I agree a good punishment is needed and some slave on slave action. keep this coming.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

I would like to have this story continue.

DINGDONG33DINGDONG334 months ago

Fun story and good story telling keep it going

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Very interesting story. Would love to read more.

TomSavageIsFakeTomSavageIsFake4 months ago

I really hope you continue the story.

Glenesslin8580Glenesslin85804 months ago

Really like the story so far.

calmropercalmroper3 months ago

Please continue

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Nice story, well-written. Please continue!

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

I hope it goes on

AnonymousAnonymous18 days ago

Carry on. Need to hear more about her and the son and Natalie too I think.

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