All Comments on 'Slave to She-Orc Cock Ch. 01'

Your writing is pretty good, but too tame. If you are looking for feedback on your skill at writing erotica, we will definitely need to see a chapter containing more than this one. A good beginning though!

The next chapter will have more content and more detailed descriptions etc.

it´s quite a nice start to the story

the implication of really dirty stuff has me looking out for more

so keep up and see you soon

(though i have to admit i really don´t care about his marriage situation)

Wow, really love the subject of your work! Nice, believable writing too. Can't wait for the next part :)

Cant wait for the next part. Keep doing what you’re doing!!

Wow that was great, the way that you set up the history was very nice, especially the the wife dialogues. Please do continue !

Can't wait to read further.