All Comments on 'Slave Trains a New Master Ch. 01'

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UBERtoesUBERtoesabout 7 years ago
Keep it cumming

I'd love to have this be on ongoing series. There aren't enough pieces that scratch my itch quite like this piece did. Would you have her worship your feet, suck your toes?

BobossweetnessfreakBobossweetnessfreakalmost 7 years ago
Grammar

Fantastic story!! The only problem I had was the grammar and punctuation. It makes it hard to follow at times but other than that, it was really great. Looking forward to reading the next chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

You found the women of my dreams!

Ravey19Ravey194 months ago

Good start, assumes he knows a lot but it seems to be working out.

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