All Comments on 'Slave Trains a New Master Ch. 04'

A very nice story line and quite interesting. It would be much, much better if the author proof read his/her manuscript and removed spelling and contextual errors.

interesting twist on the standard s&m formula. Love your writing.

Can't wait for the next chapter but PLEASE watch the grammar. Also there is a difference between: past & passed; quite & quiet; your & you're; writhe & wither; wander & wonder. Also please have someone help you with full sentences and punctuation. It makes it VERY difficult to enjoy the story when you have to stop and try ti figure out what you are trying to say. With that being said, I still gave it 5 stars.

I love this story it reminds me of how I as a Master was introduced to BDSM

There are some good ideas here, but the poor grammar and punctuation make the story largely unreadable. Did another author take over writing the last two parts?

Encore, encore!!!! or rather, please continue!!!!!!!

to bad it was never finished.

Can’t wait or the rest!!

Showed real potential but just stopped. Shame.