All Comments on 'Slave Unbound Ch. 13'

SO GOOOD AAHHH

Thank you! I am very glad you enjoyed it. I put a lot into trying make sure this chapter's fight was exciting and well paced. I'm happy that it has meet with a positive response so far. :)

Must admit I was horribly unsure whether or not I could read this chapter given that it was potentially deliberate torture of the plucky gladiator.

Thanks again for sharing

Tess (uk)

Leita will definitely face some adversity and pain before it is over, but hers is meant as a hero's journey, so she has great things ahead of her. I am glad she's already becoming a character that you care about. Nothing makes me feel better as a writer when I see that the characters I create are able to evoke emotion from my readers.

this story is truly interesting i realy like it so far i thought from the warnings it would be more brutal so this seams like the female version of sparticus with i realy love

The warnings are mostly due to a couple complaints I received from people who took the story as being meant to be arousing or erotic and who felt a few parts offended them. Adding a disclaimer was something suggested to me, so I did.

However, the story isn't really all that edgy, though does have some intense moments. It's meant more to be an adventure fantasy with adult elements, more in line with things like Sparticus, Game of Thrones, or the like. I am glad you enjoying it and I hope you continue to.