All Comments on 'Slavery Ch. 03'

Very well written!! Loving this story thus far; I can't wait for the next chapter.

And if you keep this up I will be forced to give you a prize( a bracelet with an inscription BFF perhaps?)LOL!!!!

Another easy 5 stars

Captivated by this story I am. Hmmmm, for the next chapter, waiting I cannot.

Easily a 5 star piece :-)

Am enjoying this very much and it is so unusual, interesting and to a degree harsh! I found it compulsive reading even though it is at times violent and the doctor very disturbing. Whats with Mia? I thought it was very well written and easy to visualise the scene. A definate 5 stars. Can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you

definitely looking forward to the next installment!

So excited for the next chapter!!! love how its goign so far your doing great!!

all 3 chapters and I must say that this is a wonderful story so far!!! I can't wait to read the next chapter and see where your story is heading. Great job on writing it!! :)

Well done!!!! I am enjoying this story!!!!

I love your frequent stories, yes its only 3 but I really hope for more. The world you created is so different. But... Why is Azeric in a different planet besides his own? What does that symbol mean on her neck? Was she picked to be a mate for him or was it really for convenience which later turned to mating? And yeah, what's wrong with Mia, is she jealous or something?

Loving it! Keep up the good work.

LOVE this story so far. PLEASE keep writing it!

I'm hooked. Plain and simple. :)

can't wait to read the next chapter and see where your story is heading.

Lovely chapter.

I too am wondering why he is different on his planet and what his status is as compared to the other residents. Are his kind conquerers? I am also wondering his motivation for picking Alana and not one of the other slaves. I can't wait to see where you are going with them in the next chapter.

I am officially addicted. Please update soon

This chapter flowed more smoothly and without the confusion of the previous chapter's transitions. Good job!

I rarely follow extended stories but this one has me hooked

loved it - can't wait for the next chapter

update soon. can't wait for the next chapter...

Once again, thanks for your comments. I will be submitting the next chapter over the weekend. The end of term rush has prevented me submitting this week, but bring on the summer holidays and plenty of writing time!

Alice x

İmo what makes this story different is the importance given to details, you describe the feelings of Alana during penetration so well, inch by inch we feel her pain, her desperation and eventually her pleasure by letting herself taken by Azeric, thank you for providing such enticing details of penetration moment, rest of their intercourse is hot as well but the whole penetration description is such a turn-on (at least for me)... İ also liked Azeric being tender despite his insistence on rough sex, how eagerly he grabs blue goo reminds me how my boyfriend always sweet talks me into anal with lovingly spreading the lube everytime İ complain it hurts too much, it seems alpha male behaviour never changes whether alien or human, they all want a piece of ass and think they could get any ass with some lube, it would be interesting to see Azeric trying anal with that blue goo...

It seemed she was forgetting her place in a chunk of this chapter. Slaves only get a say if Master wishes.

I liked the Dr. and how he reminded her he was there for Azeric, not her.

There are a couple of typo's still slipping thru eg. wearily should be warily