by Scarla
Wow! This is an excellent first story, and is also a fantasy of mine as well. You wrote this almost exactly as how I would if I put my thoughts to words. I hope you write again because you're very talented!
Definitely 5 Stars. I can't believe this is your first-time writing, you're very talented, I enjoyed the back-and-forth banter between them, and knowing how the story will eventually end didn't take away from reading it out.
Please keep writing, your good!
Amazing story!! I have similar fantasies but you were able to shape them, I might have gotten a new kink. Your stories make me melt 🫠
Please keep writing, I'm very excited to read more from you
Wow! Thank you to all of you! I'm so happy it seems a lot of people liked my first story. As someone with a almost debilitating praise kink your words mean a lot to me, and has me super excited to keep writing. <3
Wow I want this so bad so so... Bad. But I'm fat and ugly and I don't have pale skin so no one would ever do this with me
Very well written - the back story nicely woven into the online somnophilia audio story
I like the idea of somnophilia but prefer it as a way of eventually waking up my lover in the morning