by Sylviafan
What a tease you are! You tell us in your preamble that this will be the last we hear of Robin and Elizabeth, and then you bring Hazel into the mix and insinuate that she wants to become a full-time member of the group. To answer your question about being selfish; yes it is! It's selfish to dangle the suggestion of these three characters carrying on their menage-a-trois and not telling us about it! Please reconsider. This wonderful chapter gets 5 stars from me.
I've been a member on this site for along time and been a fan of your work for much of that time, but I have to say this is one of the hottest stories I've ever read on here.
Thank you!
To good to leave it there, definitely need more of theservice three lovely people.
A lovely story to read and finish off the tale of Elizabeth and Robin. Thank you.
Very good as ever Sylviafan. Great characters and satisfying , erotic sex. You set such high standards but to be picky, the epilogue didn't work for me. Everything was tied up neatly, then it's as if you're unsure whether to carry on or not with the story. I would say yes to the characters, but the particular hinted at thread doesn't sound particularly exciting, thrilling, or erotic. As I said, that's a minor observation another very enjoyable tale. Thank you, 5 stars.
“Elizabeth had superb legs: long and slender and shapely, her black, sheer nylon stockings and lacy suspender straps stark against her pale skin, her calves sculped and taught in her high heels, her ankles slim and intensely feminine”.
This is one the hottest description of legs and stockings I have ever read. You totally nailed it!
My first encounter with this author's stories, it won't be my last, she is up there with the best on the site. I had an intense orgasm reading both stories, hopefully I will enjoy the same pleasure when I read more of her stories. 5* Great pair of stories, so well written, so erotic must be based on personal experiences.
I feel so stupid, in my comments I presumed that the author was a woman ( because of the name) Please Mr author accept my apologies, I wasn't presuming because of the quality of the erotic sex, I have a few favourite authors of erotic sex, one apart, all are men.