All Comments on 'Sleepless'

I like the voyeuristic angle from the story. Great idea. The ending (last line) was very appropriate. I wondered if you were going to work the shower into the story.

wow....this is such an erotic story. i love the peeping-tom, Alex, so desparate for a piece of ass. The threesome was hot and the description of the sex just got me all warm and... *sigh*

would love to see the three of them in the shower..more please.

It didn't take long for me to be up totally into the thrills the whole time I read this torrid piece.

REALLY LIKED YOUR STORY IT WAS TRULY HOT.

I liked the story, I liked the plot.... I just didn't like the incorrect past tenses used. Might I suggest a proof-reader?