by lagneau blanc
I liked the story, I liked the plot.... I just didn't like the incorrect past tenses used. Might I suggest a proof-reader?
It didn't take long for me to be up totally into the thrills the whole time I read this torrid piece.
wow....this is such an erotic story. i love the peeping-tom, Alex, so desparate for a piece of ass. The threesome was hot and the description of the sex just got me all warm and... *sigh*
would love to see the three of them in the shower..more please.
I like the voyeuristic angle from the story. Great idea. The ending (last line) was very appropriate. I wondered if you were going to work the shower into the story.