All Comments on 'Slender Reed'

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I especially loved the very real description of sex here, instead of getting the literary equivalent of a choreographed porn flick. Sex is best with someone who loves you, and that makes everything that happens between you during lovemaking powerful and beautiful. I feel that you really capture that feeling in this story.

You've written an incredible piece of work, here! Your description of the sex was awesome, but what really moved me was the end -- your description of finding her as your soul mate. That was amazingly well written. Thank you!