All Comments on 'Slide'

by Dar_Jisbo

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Consider more details.

The plot is very interesting, however it feels like there is a lack of details, the introduction of characters is superficial, the sex barely described.

Consider describing how Stacey looks naked, what turned Ben on about her.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Her name is Tracy not Stacey.

pantyhosefunpantyhosefunover 2 years ago

Where is there a Tracy for me?

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