All Comments on 'Awake and Lost Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Like the premise of the story

I hope we find out more about Erika & her relationship with Harper & see where this story goes?

So far I am intrigued!

sowerofashsowerofashover 10 years ago
More please

Pretty please? This was excellently done.

TarotbTarotbabout 10 years ago
This was fantastic!

Please, please PLEASE continue this. Erica is a fantastic character; powerful and seductive, and her pursuit of the vulnerable Harper is very appealing.

I'd love to see how this develops, whether she breaks free of Riley and most important of all, hope Harper starts to return her feelings :)

Thanks!

ariesgirlariesgirlabout 10 years ago

Wow! I wonder if the roles were reversed and Harper sexually assaulted Erica would it be OK? Clearly Harper is scared, she doesn't care. Erica doesn't like what Riley does to her but yet she is starting to do some of the same things to Harper.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
This is Hot!

Can't wait to see what happens next!! :)

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