All Comments on 'Slippers at Midnight Pt. 07'

Love this tale (and strawberry rhubarb pie) — the two MCs are so well developed/feel so real within the fantasy you’ve created. The sexnic a perfect way/scene within which to add the drama/tension we knew would appear. The story of the Alpha’s first “lost” love a touching/sad revelation that confounds/compounds the fathers’s angry reaction to his daughter’s love for Elle (absurd he tells her). As a near hopeless romantic … . And please do not apologize for the “real world” imposing on your creative writing.

I normally don't read these types of stories, but thought I'd try the first paragraph..... and ended up reading the whole darn thing!

Please keep writing as you do a great job!

Thank you, so much to everyone reading along with Elle and Daciana's story! I'm submitting the next part today so it will, I hope, post in the next few days.

Any idea when the next chapter will be?