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by raveninflight

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the_worstthe_worstalmost 17 years ago
Great for a quick story!

I liked it quite a bit, good first submission! Keep "em comming, and no pun was intended...

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Lovely

There were some really clever one-liners in there. You are destined to become a famous writer.

From now on, every time I go to the mall (which isn't often) I'll be looking for the lady behind the rack, or the puddle she left behind.

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