All Comments on 'Slow Seduction'

My favorite story I have ever read on this site. Seriously. Fantastic job! I wish I was married to Ethan!

Hi @ Anonymous. Thank you for such a great compliment! I love to receive feedback from readers. :)

Thank you for the sinfully delicious read. I don't see it as a noncon, more of romantic, erotic coupling if ever I read one.

Having had the pleasure of doing the edit on this cleverly conceived and well-written story, I'd like to make a couple of comments here:

First, I believe it to be obvious that whomever placed this piece in Non-Con did not read the story through, since, what makes the story so unique is the fact that it turns out to be ANYTHING BUT that - owing to the way the writer so cleverly begins and then takes us through the story to reveal it to be an account of some very hot - and well-received, sex between a loving man and wife. In fact, it is made wonderfully clear, through both narrative and dialogue, that there was actually nothing non-consensual about it - if the reader had just made it to the end before passing judgement.

Secondly, since I personally find non-consensual sex- whether in fantasy or reality to be objectionable and degrading, as well as dangerous, I don't care to be complicit in its promotion, but Admin, through their carelessness, has done that to me here, and I do not appreciate it. I feel that, in order to rectify the situation, they need to move this story into the proper classification, as originally intended by the author.

If, on the other hand, I had been a reader expecting a Non-Con story, as promised by the classification, I'd have been sorely disappointed and highly pissed when I read through to the ending.

So there's been an obvious mistake, and I believe the folks in Admin owe it to the readers and to the author to make it right as quickly as possible.

I totally agree with all the comments. This is NOT a NC story.

Lady, I was blown away by the entire story and even to the very end as Lacey flirtingly was offering herself for another round but Ethan had nothing left in the tank so they cuddled contentedly. It appears most comments were made by women and I can see why but I'm a man and your love story had me pulsing the entire read. This is a story we can all dream of. The soft kissing, the nibbling of lips, the gentle stokes and the pounding gives a description of passion and need and lust and love we all dream of. I hope you keep writing. It's a amazingly beautiful story. I have nothing left in the tank after that either ☺

This story was amazing, if there were any cliches, I loved them. Thank you for writing