by Knightofround
Too short. I wish for much more. This is so hot!
Thanks for writing and posting here.
Completely agree with Failedscout's comments below. Really enjoyed this. Loving Vicki's attitude. Don't mind the short chapter length...so long as we get plenty of them!!
Hope you keep the story going. Thanks for posting.
You write the power dynamics really well. That whole part where she is telling him what she did while he eats her out is on fire.
Thank you guys for the compliments. There is a lot more coming. I kept it short because the next chapter might be a bit long. I like to break things up to build suspense.
I will accept all input.
Wonderful storyline and very well written. The question is how far down the rabbit hole he will go?
Veronica
no one has commented in over a year so I will now. Totally Hot! Only wish it was me. The start of the first part was abrupt though. It gave us too much to look forward to. No surprise. Can't wait to read the next chapter.