All Comments on 'Slut For Pregnant Women'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Like the fetish, story needs a little work

The idea that she got fired because she was pregnant yet working for a firm that sold contraceptives, was just too unlikely a scenario. It's like being fired from your job with a wine distributor because you were seen drinking beer after hours. It doesn't make sense and detracts from your story.<br><br>

A little oops to clean up, is the part involving the waiter/waitress. He's male when he brings the food to your table.<br><br>

<i>The waiter who brought it over glanced at me knowingly, then reached under the table as if to pick something up and, I found out later, pinched her nipples quickly but quite harshly.</i><br><br>

Then he undergoes the world's fastest sex change:<br>

<i>As she walked away, her blonde flowing hair cascading down her back, I watched as she licked a few droplets of mother's milk from her fingertips. Good Lord it was so hot knowing that another woman, a gorgeous, sexy woman, knew what was going on and loved it.</i><br><br>

The best parts were where you talked about your fetish, what turned you on about pregnant women, what you wanted to do, etc.

devad761devad761almost 9 years ago
problems

If only I had this guys problems, I could die happy!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Nice shrt-short story

Also it is line with my own taste for pregnant women.

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