by LitRiter
For some reason, I was picturing JR Ewing in the tub with his cowboy hat, cigar & his mistress. Yes, I’m old.
I was hoping it would be Fred. Judy’s husband. Serve her right. Fun story.
Wonderful story. How many girls/women have been branded whores when they have done little to deserve it. Bad news and slander travels much faster than the praise of the victim...
This story could very well be true. More than 1 girl has been branded a whore, while actually doing not much wrong. It happens in any community. I especially hate it when I hear the phrase "bastard child". This story could very well be non-fiction!!
This story was actually erotic, along with being impossibly perfect. And, the power dynamic was pretty conventional, just right. It's not my most favorite story, but it's worth reading.
I think we're supposed to figure out the father ourselves, but I'm not sure who it is. Maybe....nevermind.
A great story, but you didn't tell who the father was and how important his family was in the community for them to keep Amanda a secret. Could be an other chapter.
Wow! I really enjoyed this story! It was hot and sexy, but also had that perfect happily ever after feel to it...loved it! :) Great job LitRiter!
There are not that many good cowboy style stories here. And I am always happy to find one. This was a very good story. It is complete in itself, but for some reason I feel like I was left hanging on some issues - like who was the daddy and where all the rumors started and so forth. I hope that you will add another chapter to this.
Sounds like a nice couple - assuming her fuck buddy is out of the picture?
I think you are better suited to this genre (I know you experiment with all genres). This was warm, touching, well described. I love this about your romance stories.
Well done, well written and interesting, thanks for sharing your story and your talent.